Title: Thuy of Haiphong
Style: Elements of Droighneach, 13 syllable lines followed by 9 syllable lines, dunedh
Author: David Kute
Date: August 11th, 2024
About: A love poem about Do Thuy of Hanoi, Vietnam
Ten twenty-three my beauty was born though not for me
For the skies, for the lands, for the seas
Noble Thuy, a girl with strength, good judgment, and beauty
Ruddy and turquoise, chic stylish belle
She likes to roam freely, over fields in Haiphong
Independent, driven sunflower
She is an investigator, it’s her profession
In personal life, a Baba Vanga
Her heart burns with a passion, her benign smile gathers all
As she softens for those she holds dear
She spreads care around, sensitive to needs, generous
Lucky are those who cross paths, joyful
Her emotional depths, her control of feelings, sublime
She loves with fierceness to grand heights
She might have many wounds, but never surrenders, no
Optimistic, hopeful for the future
She’s fashionable at every turn, competent taste
While prone to exotic displays, loud
Hot pinks, lime greens, azure, and ruby apparel
Her beauty, expressed exquisitely
This intuitive, tender psychic beauty retreats
Upon being pushed or chased
Hunter or the hunted, that’s her, my kind of girl, yes
Push or pull, she is a master at
Now she hides or avoids what she doesn’t like or love
A fierce wolf or a tender deer, pursue or run
Even if I get her, she doesn’t belong to me
Like her country she is able and free
Ten twenty-three my sweet belle has her birthday party
For vast sky, for green land, a journey
David Kute writes literary fiction pieces, novellas, short stories, song lyrics, writing samples, news articles, miscellaneous fare, and articles for the blogs Rooftop on the Hanok and Mad Sage Astrology. He has lived in South Korea, Mongolia, and Vietnam.